I've lately been inspired to work on a dieselpunk piece, and I was hoping to get some feedback on the opening. General comments, advice, or editing, whatever you all think about it. Flying was a…Continue
Started Mar 3, 2011
I am a college student, aspiring writer, and amateur jazz musician, and for as long as I can remember I have been in love with the inter-war period and the two-fisted pulp stories set during that time.
I'm currently (as in, instead of studying) working on sketching out an alternate-history Dieselpunk story involving (you guessed it) zeppelins and a band of aero-mercenaries caught between a corrupt corporate executive and the emerging Nazi party. Very Sky Captain-esque. Anyone, especially the AH buffs out there, is welcome to inquire, as I'd love to brainstorm about the setting and such.
T. von Kramer said… Your story sounds interesting. Anytime you want a test-reader, send something my way! I spent the last couple months swapping story sketches with a friend and anything other than my own writing would be refreshing.
David Mark Brown said… I will be diving back into a rewrite on Monday and was wondering if you had any feedback for me. If you haven't had a chance to read it no worries. Feel free to wait for the improved version! If you have read any of it you can just shoot me your comments this weekend and it would be greatly appreciated.
Some critical issues have been brought to my attention that somehow my editors totally snoozed on. So I am looking forward to getting them fixed.
Thanks again,
David
David Mark Brown said… Hey Eric,
I am needing Beta readers for my novel to make extra sure it is ready for release. I would love to have your expert feedback if you are interested. While the book is not heavy with dieselpunk elements (I believe the next one will be more so), it is set in the era. I posted a bit more description here:
http://www.dieselpunks.org/forum/topics/need-beta-readers
It is and will be ebook only, so I understand that will be a limiting factor for some. No worries either way.
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